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Re: Prologue: Keylee
I have to say I quite enjoyed this piece. I think you had wonderful description, which really painted a picture in my mind. The posts before me have already caught ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: words on edge chapter 1
Hey, I wanted to say that I like the plot line, and the other things I was going to point out have already been said, so again be careful of ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Sands of Time [1]
I love it! can't wait to read more.
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: This is different (part 1)
Thanks That really helped! I just went back and edited it slightly.
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Sword, chapter 1(rated 12+ for violence)
Wow that was amazing. The only thing I must say to you about it is that The time era seems a bit confusing. Other than that I can't wait to ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Mystery Man [Ch. 1]
I like this piece, it intrigues me. I think you can replace some of the she's with the girls name though, it might make a very good rythem to the ...
Dec 17, 2009